- 任务回应
- 7.0分
- 连贯与衔接
- 7.0分
- 词汇资源
- 6.0分
- 语法范围与准确性
- 6.0分
A group of people believe that music course should not be included in the school curriculum, and children should focus on learning important subjects such as mathematics, science, computer and language. I personally disagree with the statement, since I believe that music plays an important part in human's life and the following essay will discuss it in details.