首页雅思 Task 2 范文 Stricter Punishments for Road Safety

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Transport·Crime·Punishment

The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In my opinion, one of the major causes of road accidents is the violation of traffic rules. The best way to keep the drivers to remain law obedient is to give them punishment for offensive driving and for breaking the traffic rules.

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