Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, people are living in modern society and every person tries to have his or her own place among others by developing different relationships with others and relying on them. So many argue that people are becoming dependent on their relations, however, this is refuted by others.

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In the modern society, many people believe that dependence is a new trend in their daily basis, others reject this notion, holding a totally opposite opinion. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.