In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. This trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.
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Before embarking on tertiary education, many young people are advised to work or travel during their gap year. While it offers young learners the opportunity to gain some work experience and helps in their personal development, many of them may struggle to get back into study and feel left out as this trend has both merits and demerits.