In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
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Peoples are divided on the issue that countries should encourage the young peoples to do jobs or to travel before attending university. Some people think that it is better for students to attend university, while others believe that travelling and working before joining the university for formal education is better for the students to understand the world.
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It is understandable to think that taking a year between finishing high school and starting university studies might be a good think to do. For starters, both working and travelling are two activities that provide experiences of some sort to anyone, and doing so, should give the student a new perspective on his or her life.