Mixed Charts

The graph below shows the average monthly use of health clubs in Miami and Florida by all full-time members in 2017. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members of this health club.

Mixed-chart visual for an IELTS Academic Task 1 question about Miami and Florida Health Club Use.
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  1. Band 5.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 5.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 5.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 4.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 4.5

    The infographic representation in the form of the first bar graph illustrates the monthly usage of the health club in two cities in 2017, and the second pie chart topics the age of men and women members of the health club.

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  2. Band 6.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 6.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The bar graph depicts the average monthly use of health in Miami and Florida in the year 2017, and the pie chart illustrates the age of different sex members of the club. Overall, the bar graph shows that the number of members is highest in the month of June and in Feb it is the least one.

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