The bar graph below represents data about the clubs joined by people of two different age groups at a leisure centre in a small city.
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- Task Achievement
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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The bar graph illustrates the number of people from two age groups (25–35 and 55–65) who joined six different leisure clubs in a small city. Overall, younger people showed a strong preference for cycling and arts and crafts, while older individuals were more inclined towards gardening.
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- Task Achievement
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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The bar graph exhibits how many people from two age groups (25-35 and 55-65) joined different clubs aimed for leisure activities in a small urban area. It is obvious that elder people preferred gardening while cycling was mostly taken up by youngsters.