You have just spent a weekend staying at the Lilo Hotel in Adelaide. When you got home, you find that you have left a bag at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: - introduce yourself - describe the bag and its content - describe how you left your bag and what action you would expect from him/her
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I may have left my duffel bag at your hotel before leaving the place. I am hoping that you would arrange to send the bag to my address.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
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Dear Sir or Madam, I have recently stayed at your London Hilton hotel on Park Lane and regrettably left my bag in the room I stayed in. I am writing to seek your assistance and help regarding this and I would really appreciate it if you could courier it to my home address soon.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Martin Ben, and I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left a bag at your hotel before leaving Adelaide. Unfortunately, I came to know about this mistake only after arriving at Sydney Airport.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear Sir or Madam, I stayed at your Lilo Hotel in Adelaide from 2nd to 5th April 2025 in room 254. I am writing for your assistance in finding the bag that I have left in the room during my stay at your hotel.