Home General Task 1 SamplesSports Team Sponsorship or Open-Air Concerts

A large company in your area plans either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend the money

Timed practice

Finish under time and see where you stand on each of the four criteria.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to express my appreciation for your decision to spend money for the benefit of our community - either to sponsor a local juvenile sports team or to arrange two concerts.
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Band 7.5
Task Achievement
Band 8.0
Coherence and Cohesion
Band 7.0
Lexical Resource
Band 7.0
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Band 7.0
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to profoundly thank your organisation for the decision to spend money for the benefit of our community. I deeply appreciate your readiness to sponsor a local junior sports team or alternatively arrange two open-air concerts.
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