You have learned that a financial organisation in your city gives money as a loan to students who like to take a part-time course. You are interested to do the course and have decided to take a loan. Write a letter to a local financial organisation. In your letter: - give your qualifications and work experience - give details about the course - explain how this course will help you
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about the loan your bank disburses to aspiring students for a few affiliated courses. I am willing to take a part-time Microsoft Office course at Skill Tech and hoping that you would grant me a small loan.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about the student loan that your bank grants to aspiring students or professionals to help them finish skill development courses as part-timers. I am a graduate and my major is physics.