You rented a car from a car rental company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like the company to take
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- Task Achievement
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- Coherence and Cohesion
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- Lexical Resource
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- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is John Timothy, and I rented a car from your company on 24th June. Unfortunately, the car has a major problem and need your attention to fix the issue.
- Band 7.0View annotated correction →
- Task Achievement
- Band 7.5
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to draw your attention to a problem with the car I hired from your company, Phillip Car Rental, City Center branch in Colombo, on 24th November. I rented it for a month and paid fifteen days' rent upfront.