You have bought a new mobile phone and in a few days of purchase, it has stopped working. You spoke to the company representative a week ago but it has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain the situation - say what action you would like the company to take
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with a recent purchase I made in your store, located at Whales Road. I am Shivani Gupta, a frequent visitor to your shop.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am David Fisher, writing to express my concern about a recent purchase I made from your company. Even after contacting your company a week ago, I am yet to get any solution.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I purchased a smartphone a month ago from your store in the Abbey Avenue Complex and was very thrilled to own this particular model. Unfortunately, after only a few days, the phone stopped working and even after claiming the warranty, I have not heard anything from the store.
- Band 7.5View annotated correction →
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Dear Sir or Madam, I purchased a brand new Samsung Smartphone from one of your stores. I was delighted to purchase it but frustrated to find that it stopped working after a few days of use.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to claim my warranty for the mobile phone that I purchased two weeks ago from your store. The phone does not turn on just after a week of purchase and I have a valid replacement warranty for the phone.
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to notify you that I have recently purchased a brand-new mobile phone from your store and it stopped working after a week. I want you to replace this mobile phone with a new one as per the warranty clauses.
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- Band 7.5
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Emilly Brooks, and I am writing to you regarding a recent purchase I made from your company. I purchased a new iPhone 15 Pro mobile phone from your store last week.
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Dear Sir or Madam, Two weeks ago I purchased a brand new mobile phone from your shop. I was excited to have purchased it but very disappointed to find that the phone was poorly produced and stopped working within a week of purchase.