You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: - say who you are - give details about the accident - suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a regular customer of your renowned supermarket 'Meena Bazar'. Today I am writing to you regarding a minor accident that I faced while visiting your supermarket on 28th November.
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- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 6.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 6.5
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 6.5
Dear Sir or Madam, Two days ago I went to your supermall to do some shopping and got injured in a minor accident. I am writing to inform you how this accident took place and what you can do to prevent such accidents in the future.