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Opinion Essay

People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

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  1. Band 6.0
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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Band 5.5
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    Drug addiction has become a serious problem in our society. It has spoiled dreams and aspirations of thousands of families.

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  2. Band 6.0
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    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 5.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The people of the Modern world are always in search of new enjoyments and new attractions. While drugs are lifesavers when they are taken for the health issue and prescribed by the doctors, it can also be fatal if taken for temporary amusement.

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