Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children's studies. And, those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion on this?
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Digital games on computers and smartphones are hugely popular among youngsters all around the world and their prevalence is upsurging faster than ever. No doubt our youngsters are spending a vast amount of their time playing these games, and parents are concerned about it.
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The trend of playing computer and digital games is increasingly becoming popular among youth across the globe. Nonetheless, numerous parents criticize it, arguing that it holds no educational value and poses detrimental effects on their children's mental and physical development.