All university undergraduate courses should include a period of time spent studying abroad or doing a work placement. Do you think the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?
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It is undeniable that undergraduate university has become a bridge linking between theoretical knowledge and pratical experience. Therefore, some educaters argue that the college courses are supposed to include a period of studying overseas or completing a work placement.
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It is undeniable that undergraduate university has become a bridge linking between theoretical knowledge and pratical experience. Therefore, some educaters argue that the college courses are supposed to include a period of studying overseas or completing a work placement.
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People have different views about whether all university undergraduate curriculum should include a period of time for studying abroad or seek a temporary career. In my opinion, while it may negatively affect their formal learning, it is worth to have a gap year for studying abroad or find a short-term job.