Art is essential for people and society but they are often overlooked and poorly funded. Some think that the government should pay for those art projects, and of course, observe precisely how those funds are being spent and on what type of projects it is being used. How far do you agree with this opinion?
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Nowadays creative projects have become very expensive and can not bring pay-off to their authors. Some people think that the government should pay for those projects and of course, observe precisely how those funds are being spent and on what type of projects it is being used.
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Art has been a vital part of human civilization since the beginning of time. However, despite its significance, art is often neglected and inadequately funded.