In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

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It is universally agreed that work is very crucial and vital element in life. There are many people who believe that children should be involved in paid work.