Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce this pressure?

Task Response

Band 8.0

Coherence and Cohesion

Band 8.0

Lexical Resource

Band 8.0

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 8.0

In recent times, children have been experiencing mounting pressure from various aspects of their lives, such as academics, social interactions, and commercialism. In this essay, we will delve into the causes of these pressures and outline some measures that could be taken to alleviate them.