Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce this pressure?
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With the ever-increasing competition and demands in life, a child’s family, school and society expect too much from the child. While it is important to excel in schools, sports, social activities and other aspects of life, those children should be shielded from the mounting pressures by maintaining a balance in their lives.
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In recent times, children have been experiencing mounting pressure from various aspects of their lives, such as academics, social interactions, and commercialism. In this essay, we will delve into the causes of these pressures and outline some measures that could be taken to alleviate them.