Discussion Essay

Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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    These days the majority of companies are approaching various strategies such as sponsoring sports events to increase their sales.

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    Coherence and Cohesion
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    Lexical Resource
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    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 5.5

    The way of advertisement has changed over time, nowadays sponsorship is common among the other ways. Some argued that there are many benefits to advertising, while other people think it has more drawbacks.

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