Positive or Negative Development Essay

Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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    The world is changing very fast; big will not beat small anymore; it will be the fast beating the slow. These words hold true for today’s global village in which we live in a 24/7 society.

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    People tend to be more competitive in modern society. In my view, being competitive has a major influence on many aspects of a person’s life, which can be considered both beneficial and harmful in certain situations.

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