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Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

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  1. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.5
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 6.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    The ever increasing job competition, the pressure of constant deadlines, the technological dependency in jobs and people’s expectation to thrive in the workplace have changed the definition of professional life and most of the employees require to work harder and for long hours each day.

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  2. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    It is a fact that working hours are getting longer and the work pressure is getting more intense these days. There are various reasons that have caused the situation and there are some things that employers can do to help their staffs.

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  3. Band 6.5
    Task Response
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 6.5
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.0

    The economic inflation, increased unemployment and nature of businesses around the globe have made it mandatory for employees to work longer hours. The long and challenging working hours, social and economical condition and modernization have also increased the amount of stress we feel in our working places.

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