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Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

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    A large proportion of healthcare professionals find that their advice to elderly people concerning exercise is not heeded. In my opinion, this is due to practical concerns and the best encouragement would be through government initiatives.

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    Old people should involve in regular physical activity to maintain their health. This essay shall delve into the advantages of regular exercise for older people and the problems faced by them.

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