The economic development plays a major role in people’s lives. Economic growth in both developed and developing countries make the country richer, but it is believed that people in developing countries are happier that those in developed ones. Do you agree or disagree?
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It is widely accepted that economic development plays a major role in a country’s progress. While economic growth makes nations wealthier, I agree that people in developing countries can often be happier than those in developed nations.
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Economic advancement is one of the chief goals of every nation and its government across the globe. The economic state of a country greatly determines the standard of living of that country’s population.