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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gyms or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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    Subsidized gym or sports club membership is often offered by employers as a way to improve the health of their staff, and as a result, their productivity. While some employers think it will transform their employees to be more healthy and productive, others tend to disagree.

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