Opinion Essay

The government should allocate more funding to teaching science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

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    People have different views on the subjects that the government should invest in and prioritise, to achieve what is termed economic development. Some believe that a larger portion of government funds should be dedicated to teaching science-related.

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    How to allocate government’s expenditure has long been a highly charged issue. While 1 accept that there should be an increase in state funds for imparting science-related knowledge, 1 would argue that other subjects are of similar significance in the progression of a nation.

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