When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important.
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In the contemporary epoch, people are employed in a diverse range of occupations for their everyday survival. It is typically believed that the most crucial aspect while selecting our job is monetary incentives.
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We cannot deny that we work to earn money so that we can put food on the table for the family. However, we also look for job satisfaction, growth opportunity and social recognition from our careers and only salary can not make us happy in our professional life.
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Employee hiring and retention are two utmost important tasks of Human Resource department of modern enterprises. Organisations spend a great deal of money studying the reasons of attrition.
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Most people believe that the wage is the main factor of making a decision for a career. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea as I will discuss in the following paragraph.
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The salary is regarded as one of the most important factors while making a choice between jobs. Salary is the real outcome of the job performed and hence it becomes a prominent part in job selection.
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In today's expensive world, needs of the people are growing day by day. To fulfil all their desires, money is an important factor.
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It has been proven that salary has been one of the important factors when people are looking for a job but undeniably, different people have various opinions about their favourite job which are directly depended on people’ ages, their characters, expectation, qualification and the economic situation.
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Payment from a job is one of the essential aspects for people to consider but it is not the only reason people take a new job or continue the existing one. I personally believe that there are other important considerations while choosing a job.
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Many people contemplate their salary as the most salient feature of their job while others believe that other aspects could be more important. In my opinion, a job should have ethical demands and needs to be passion-oriented and salary is not the most important aspect.