When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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We cannot deny that we work to earn money so that we can put food on the table for the family. However, we also look for job satisfaction, growth opportunity and social recognition from our careers and only salary can not make us happy in our professional life.
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Many people contemplate their salary as the most salient feature of their job while others believe that other aspects could be more important. In my opinion, a job should have ethical demands and needs to be passion-oriented and salary is not the most important aspect.