Opinion Essay

Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    Nowadays, the growing disparity between the salaries of high-level executives and the average employees has become a major concern among policy-makers. While some argue that giving high compensation to directors and managers can bring about many perks, I am still of the opinion that it is only beneficial to a certain extent.

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    It is argued that multinational companies should give higher wages to prominent workers such as CEOs and executives than other personnel. I completely agree with the statement because they have more responsibilities and are highly committed to investing more hours in addition to their remuneration for making a profit for their organizations.

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