Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care than ever before. What may be the primary reason for this? Is this is positive or negative development?

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In contemporary society, there is an unprecedented surge in the expenditure on beauty care by both men and women. This phenomenon can be attributed to various factors, and its implications on individuals and society at large are subject to diverse interpretations.