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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

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    Indulging children has become a common parenting problem in many modern families. From my perspective, this practice may create some immediate adverse impacts on children and also results in long-term consequences for them.

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    Parenting can be a complicated task to overcome every once in a while and sometimes the affection felt towards children can make it difficult for parents to deny the desires of their young ones. Although this might not seem like a serious issue at face value such practices can lead to the development of unhealthy habits in children.

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