It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
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Some people believe that children can not distinguish right from wrong, and parents and teachers should instil morality and responsibility in them even if it means imposing some sort of punishment. I agree with this opinion, but I believe that they must first explain and advise them, and only after several violations or impish acts, they should use punishment.
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Education and learning are crucial for every child, and it is not just about academic studies. It is also important to teach children about behaviour and attitude from an early age.
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Some people believe that parents and teachers should teach young children the distinction between right and wrong at an early age and punishment could be a useful tool to achieve this.