Societies benefit from the closer relationship we have with foreigners through international tourism and business. To what extent do your agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that people have many advantages from international business and tourism. However, I totally disagree with this opinion and firmly believe that people have much more disadvantages than advantages from the international relationship with different countries.