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Opinion Essay

Societies benefit from the closer relationship we have with foreigners through international tourism and business. To what extent do your agree or disagree?

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    Since the dawn of time people around the world develop a closer relationship not only to their own country but also internationally. This is because of the growing tourism industry internationally and the business dealings each country has.

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    A society is an amalgamation of different people with different cultures. The impact on a society depends on the influence of various people with different cultures.

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    Some people believe that people have many advantages from international business and tourism. However, I totally disagree with this opinion and firmly believe that people have much more disadvantages than advantages from the international relationship with different countries.

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    International tourism and business play a very crucial role throughout the world. It is clearly seen that countries are beneficial to each other through the sound relationships.

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    It is believed that communities get a lot of benefits from the international tourism industry and foreign investments. Although these industries sometimes bring negative effects to the local communities, I personally believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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