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Opinion Essay

Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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  1. Band 8.0
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    Some people suggest that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from television broadcasts and international sporting competitions. I agree with the notion that such sports should be prohibited from these platforms due to the potential harm they can inflict on athletes and the promotion of aggressive behaviour as a form of entertainment.

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  2. Band 7.5
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    Band 7.5
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    Some believe that fierce sports like mixed martial arts, fencing, and boxing promote aggression and desensitize viewers to violence, and therefore should be banned from media and international competitions.

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