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Technology·Children·Health

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Write not less than 250 words.

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Nowadays, young children use computers so frequently that some even use them more than 10 hours every day. Although some people believe that the phenomenon has no harmful effects on young children, I agree that the disadvantages of it outweigh the advantages.

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