The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2016 Rio Olympic Games.
Sample Response
The table listsenlists the top ten countries in the 2016 Rio Olympic GamesRio Olympic Games 2016 and shows how many medals these countries won in the competition. As can be seen, the United States held the top position by winning 121 medals, of which121 medals among which 46 were gold medals. As the illustration outlines, the US won 121 medalstrophies in the 2016 Rio Olympic Games and this number was almost twicealmost double than the medal total achievedreward attained by the second-best team, the UK. American athletes achieved 4645 gold, 37 silver and 38 bronze medals while these numbers were 27, 23 and 17 respectively for the UK. Despite winning 3 more medals than the Great Britain, China attained the third position as their gold and silver medal winning competitors were fewer than that of the Great Britain. Russia, Germany, Japan and France respectively heldconsecutively help fourth to seventh positions4th till 7th position and their medal totals weretheir total medal were between 40 andto 56. Russia and Germany gained 19 and 17 gold medals while Japan and France secured 12 and 10 of them. The last three countries on this list are the Republic of KoreaKorea, Italy and Australia with fewerless than 30 medals among which 8-9 were gold medals. The number of medals won by Australia was 29, one morehigher than that of Italy, butItaly but 12 silver medals pushed Italy higher on the list. It is interesting to note that the top three countries in this list cumulatively won more medals than the rest of the countries did in this tournament.
Why this response received Band 6.5
The response is strongest in its broad coverage of the ranking, with useful comparisons across the leading, middle, and lower-performing countries and generally clear progression. Its main limitation is factual precision: the United States' gold-medal figure changes from 46 to 45, and the top three actually won one fewer medal than the other seven combined. Prioritise checking every figure and calculated comparison against the table before finalising the overview.
IELTS Writing Criteria Scores
Task Achievement
The response identifies the main ranking pattern and covers most countries with relevant comparisons, but two conspicuous numerical claims are inaccurate.
Verify the United States' 46 gold medals and replace the incorrect top-three aggregate claim with an accurate overall comparison.
Coherence and Cohesion
Information progresses logically from the highest-ranked countries to the lowest, although the single long paragraph weakens structural clarity.
Separate the overview from two detail paragraphs grouping the leading nations and the remaining countries.
Lexical Resource
A reasonably varied vocabulary describes ranks and medal totals, but choices such as "trophies," "reward," and "medal winning competitors" are imprecise or awkward.
Use exact table-reporting terms such as medals, totals, rankings, and gold-medal counts throughout.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
The response uses varied sentence structures, but recurring agreement, article, preposition, and comparison errors reduce control.
Correct forms such as "almost double," "Great Britain," and "totals ranged from 40 to 56," while checking subject-verb agreement.
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IELTS Academic Writing Task 1
The table below shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2016 Rio Olympic Games.
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