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The diagram below shows one way of manufacturing ceramic pots

Hình minh họa cho đề IELTS Academic Task 1 về Ceramic Pot Manufacturing Process.
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  1. Band 7.0
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.0
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 6.5

    The picture reveals one of the viable methods of producing ceramic pots Overall, it can be easily seen that the process comprises of eleven steps.

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  2. Band 7.5
    Task Achievement
    Band 7.0
    Coherence and Cohesion
    Band 7.5
    Lexical Resource
    Band 7.0
    Grammatical Range and Accuracy
    Band 7.5

    The diagram illustrates the steps by which ceramic pots are manufactured. In general, the production of ceramic pots involves nine steps, beginning with the collection of raw materials, to the colouring and decoration of the finished product.

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