A large company in your area plans either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to express my appreciation for your decision to spend money for the benefit of our community - either to sponsor a local juvenile sports team or to arrange two concerts.
- Band 7.5Xem bài chấm chi tiết →
- Task Achievement
- Band 8.0
- Coherence and Cohesion
- Band 7.0
- Lexical Resource
- Band 7.0
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy
- Band 7.0
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to profoundly thank your organisation for the decision to spend money for the benefit of our community. I deeply appreciate your readiness to sponsor a local junior sports team or alternatively arrange two open-air concerts.