Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Museums like the Louvre in Paris, The British Museum in London, and the National Museum of New Delhi allure a large number of tourists from all over the world. While most museums are funded by the state government, some museums charge an entry fee for their visitors.

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Nowadays, there are lots of debates around whether museums should charge for admission. I think the advantages of this action far outweigh the disadvantages.

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Museums preserve and represent important local and global history, scientific inventions, traditions and many other important aspects of our civilisations. Many museums charge visitors for granting entry while some are free.

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Many museums have admission fees while others allow visitors free entry. Both approaches have merits and demerits that this essay will deal with.

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Whether entry to a museum should be free or not, and which one offers greater benefit is often hotly debated. This essay will carefully outline the advantages and disadvantages of paid entry to museums and opine why entry fee to a museum offers more disadvantages than benefits.