Some people say that today’s children are living under more pressure from society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the 21st century, people enjoy a more comfortable life with better facilities, increased life expectancy and more possibilities than ever before. Despite these advancements and achievements, many people feel that modern children are living under immense pressure from society, and I quite agree with this viewpoint.