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The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

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    The line graph compares the electricity demand in England during a regular day in winter and in summer while the pie chart shows the usages of the electricity. Generally speaking, during the winter season, the demand for electricity was much higher than that of the summer in England.

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    The illustrations show the electricity demand in England in a typical day in winter and summer and also how people use this electricity. According to the first line graph, we can see that the electricity demand in winter is much higher than the demand in summer in England.

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