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The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

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    The bar chart compares post-school educational attainment among men and women in Australia in 1999.

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    The illustration compares the post-school qualifications of Australian male and female in 1999. As is observed, more female's highest educational qualification was undergraduate diploma and bachelor degree while male outnumbered female in higher qualification levels and skilled education.

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    The bar graph compares post-school qualification in Australia based on gender for the year 1999. Generally speaking, more male achieved their post-school degrees in skilled vocational diploma, Masters degree and postgraduate diploma than females did while for more female, the highest educational qualification was undergraduate diploma and Bachelor's degree.

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