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The diagram shows the different stages in the production of woollen goods

雅思学术类 Task 1 题目图片，主题为 Woollen Goods Production Process。
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    The chart illustrates the various steps in the process of making woollen products. Overall, there are 10 principal stages in this process, beginning with the rearing of sheep and ending with the finished goods.

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    The diagram illustrates how wool is produced for both personal and industrial use. Generally, it is clear that there are various steps involved, beginning with the sheep being sheared and ending with the woolen yarns being knitted or woven into commercially made jackets and carpets.

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