地图题

The maps show a road system as it is now and the propesed changes in future to reduce the number of accidents.

雅思学术类 Task 1 地图，主题为 Road System Changes to Reduce Accidents。
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    The maps provide a number of suggested changes to the existing road system to enhance the safety of roads. Overall, the primary proposed changes are the construction of a major roundabout, the installation of sets of traffic lights and the restructuring of current roads.

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    The maps provide information about a current road system and proposed changes to increase the safety of its users. Overall, the main changes being proposed include a major roundabout, the installation of several sets of traffic lights, and some restructuring of existing roadways.

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