Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go...
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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the...
Nowadays, the designs of the buildings in the community are affected by other cultures. This results in loss of cultural identity of the structures in the community. People...
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The only way to improve the safety on our own road is to have stricter punishment for driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from...
The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Students who go directly from school to university benefit less from and contribute less to their courses than those who take a job or travel in order to get more experience in...
In some countries, the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians...
In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this...
There are many ways of preventing crimes that are much better than prison. Do you agree or disagree with this view?