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It is suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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    In the age of technological dominance, some people, quite interestingly, propose a retro teaching style for primary children: instructing them on vegetable and animal caring. From my perspective, albeit some obvious advantages, they will be eclipsed by this educational method's considerable disadvantages.

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    Some people believe that children should learn how to grow vegetables and raise animals in primary school. I believe this is an absolute necessary life skill that all children must learn, and that there are essentially no negative sides to this argument.

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