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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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    Today, some claim that businesses should also have social obligations. While I acknowledge that the primary purpose of any company is to generate profits, businesses should also make social contributions within their sphere of influence.

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    Some people believe that businesses should bear some responsibility to society in addition to making profits. I personaly agree with this viewpoint as I believe that without such responsibilities, private companies can cause too much harm to people and the planet for the sake of money.

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