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Zoos are inhumane and should be abolished. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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    Some people advocate for the dissolution of zoos as they believe that those are inhumane. The assertion that zoological gardens are inherently barbaric and should be abolished paints a simplistic picture of a complex issue.

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    The ethical implications surrounding the existence of zoos continue to spark contentious debates and some opine that they are inhuman and should not exist. I am in staunch agreement that zoos, due to their inherent inhumanity, should be abolished for compelling reasons that challenge their ethical standing.

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